Mister McIntyre’s Secret – Part One

12 Responses to “Mister McIntyre’s Secret – Part One”

  1. Ellie says:

    Ooh, another female narrator!

  2. Ellie says:

    Ooh, another female narrator!

  3. Mariella says:

    Dear, sweet Christ, doll…no fair.

  4. Mariella says:

    Dear, sweet Christ, doll…no fair.

  5. Jack says:

    ellie: all the better for female readers to record.

    mariella: I’m not very. Sometimes I’m practically brutal.

  6. Jack says:

    ellie: all the better for female readers to record.mariella: I’m not very. Sometimes I’m practically brutal.

  7. Lilly says:

    I’ll vouch for the brutal 😉

    an interesting twist there, Mr. Jack, with this one..more please…

  8. Lilly says:

    I’ll vouch for the brutal ;)an interesting twist there, Mr. Jack, with this one..more please…

  9. Janie Blooms says:

    Ohhh, okay, then! This is some real good stuff. I read it aloud!

    And I wonder if I should wait to comment til I read all four parts. But I’m just gonna start now: the blinking away tears part was just terrific. You are right on.

  10. Janie Blooms says:

    Ohhh, okay, then! This is some real good stuff. I read it aloud! And I wonder if I should wait to comment til I read all four parts. But I’m just gonna start now: the blinking away tears part was just terrific. You are right on.

  11. Curvaceous Dee says:

    Oh, I’m intrigued! Can’t wait to read more :)

    xx Dee

  12. Curvaceous Dee says:

    Oh, I’m intrigued! Can’t wait to read more :)xx Dee

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