Comments on: Fiction – Backroom http://writingdirty.com/archives/10 erotic short stories by jack stratton Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:52:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: showingmyassets http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-1500 showingmyassets Wed, 23 Dec 2009 04:10:55 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-1500 really good story there. loved the whole thing... really good story there. loved the whole thing…

]]> By: songbird http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-149 songbird Sat, 20 Sep 2008 16:34:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-149 "Is it a power thing to want to make a girl come? It’s the thing that gets me off the hardest. And god damn I wanted to make her come." That is hot. But I think I'd prefer the story more if she didn't come, if the customers came in 2 seconds earlier. Leave her horny as hell. Be unpredictable. “Is it a power thing to want to make a girl come? It’s the thing that gets me off the hardest. And god damn I wanted to make her come.” That is hot. But I think I’d prefer the story more if she didn’t come, if the customers came in 2 seconds earlier. Leave her horny as hell. Be unpredictable.

]]> By: Janie Blooms http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-32 Janie Blooms Sun, 20 Jul 2008 17:36:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-32 Wowww.<br/><br/>This is some awesome stuff.<br/><br/>Field hockey girl. R. Crumb. And that sense of urgency that just propels this tale like a freight train heading to Orgasmtown.<br/><br/>I'm putting you on my blog roll. Fucking hot writing. Wowww.

This is some awesome stuff.

Field hockey girl. R. Crumb. And that sense of urgency that just propels this tale like a freight train heading to Orgasmtown.

I’m putting you on my blog roll. Fucking hot writing.

]]> By: Mariella http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-25 Mariella Mon, 14 Jul 2008 21:22:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-25 Fucking YUM, sir... Fucking YUM, sir…

]]> By: Jack http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-8 Jack Sat, 28 Jun 2008 04:51:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-8 ellie<br/><br/>Wow. That would be awesome. Let's see what we can come up with when I get back to states.<br/><br/>lilly<br/><br/>Spank. Glad you liked it. ellie

Wow. That would be awesome. Let’s see what we can come up with when I get back to states.

lilly

Spank. Glad you liked it.

]]> By: Ellie http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-7 Ellie Sat, 28 Jun 2008 02:49:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-7 So when are you going to do a reading of some of your work on my podcast? So when are you going to do a reading of some of your work on my podcast?

]]> By: Lilly http://writingdirty.com/archives/10/comment-page-1#comment-6 Lilly Wed, 25 Jun 2008 02:13:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=10#comment-6 :) Just what I was looking for.... :) Just what I was looking for….

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