Comments on: Fiction – The Wrong Smith Girl http://writingdirty.com/archives/18 erotic short stories by jack stratton Wed, 28 Jul 2010 15:52:21 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: goooood http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-1719 goooood Thu, 24 Jun 2010 19:45:27 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-1719 pulsing. pulsing.

]]> By: Table of Contents « writingdirty http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-1032 Table of Contents « writingdirty Sun, 06 Dec 2009 16:15:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-1032 [...] The Wrong Smith Girl An emotional tale about Jack and Maggie and how they broke up, but still had to spend the weekend with her parents. Also about how sisters can look a lot alike, but be completely different. [...] [...] The Wrong Smith Girl An emotional tale about Jack and Maggie and how they broke up, but still had to spend the weekend with her parents. Also about how sisters can look a lot alike, but be completely different. [...]

]]> By: A Good Start at writingdirty http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-517 A Good Start at writingdirty Sun, 28 Dec 2008 01:17:56 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-517 [...] The Wrong Smith Girl I think this is one of my best pieces. A break up on a train and an awkward family reunion lead to a sleepy guy mixing up two sisters and a crush coming to light. [...] [...] The Wrong Smith Girl I think this is one of my best pieces. A break up on a train and an awkward family reunion lead to a sleepy guy mixing up two sisters and a crush coming to light. [...]

]]> By: pet http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-160 pet Tue, 23 Sep 2008 17:00:07 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-160 perfect! I've found myself in this exact same spot and worked to regain my "molly"lol perfect! I’ve found myself in this exact same spot and worked to regain my “molly”lol

]]> By: songbird http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-148 songbird Sat, 20 Sep 2008 16:18:27 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-148 Cathartic, very Jack, real, honest, raw. Cathartic, very Jack, real, honest, raw.

]]> By: Sexual Adventurer http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-51 Sexual Adventurer Mon, 28 Jul 2008 22:56:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-51 This was delicious...thank you for sharing. This was delicious…thank you for sharing.

]]> By: Jack http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-23 Jack Mon, 14 Jul 2008 14:50:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-23 Lilly: I'm always more than happy to get you off. Thanks for the editing help.<br/><br/>Mariella: I do like the south as a backdrop. Since it has been so hot in NYC lately I find myself starting stories things like Tennessee Williams plays, everyone sweating and horny and on edge.<br/><br/>As someone who dated a Maggie for a long time I know they can blossom once they figure out what they want. Plus it's good to remember that Molly and Maggie are really the same person, just at different periods in their lives. Finding the balence between responsible good girl and dirty little slut is important for everyone.<br/><br/>Luckily I've fucked them both. Lilly: I’m always more than happy to get you off. Thanks for the editing help.

Mariella: I do like the south as a backdrop. Since it has been so hot in NYC lately I find myself starting stories things like Tennessee Williams plays, everyone sweating and horny and on edge.

As someone who dated a Maggie for a long time I know they can blossom once they figure out what they want. Plus it’s good to remember that Molly and Maggie are really the same person, just at different periods in their lives. Finding the balence between responsible good girl and dirty little slut is important for everyone.

Luckily I’ve fucked them both.

]]> By: Mariella http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-22 Mariella Mon, 14 Jul 2008 12:47:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-22 So totally gorgeous, and the Faulkner hound in me totally gushed over the Southern-style plantation house. Places like that seem almost destined for dark deeds like sister-swapping.<br/><br/>Feeling like I'm on the 'Maggie' fence in my own life, not sure which direction I want to go in, so I was really sad for her. She seems more than a little lost in her own skin. <br/><br/>There's such care in your development, just a stellar job all-around. Can't wait to read more of your work. So totally gorgeous, and the Faulkner hound in me totally gushed over the Southern-style plantation house. Places like that seem almost destined for dark deeds like sister-swapping.

Feeling like I’m on the ‘Maggie’ fence in my own life, not sure which direction I want to go in, so I was really sad for her. She seems more than a little lost in her own skin.

There’s such care in your development, just a stellar job all-around. Can’t wait to read more of your work.

]]> By: Lilly http://writingdirty.com/archives/18/comment-page-1#comment-21 Lilly Sun, 13 Jul 2008 20:44:00 +0000 http://s201893272.onlinehome.us/?p=18#comment-21 I loved this story the first time you shared it with me. There's a good background lead-up to it - draws you in more. <br/><br/>I can always so easily picture the scenes you paint. Put myself in the girls place in the story. Your stories, without fail, get me off. I loved this story the first time you shared it with me. There’s a good background lead-up to it – draws you in more.

I can always so easily picture the scenes you paint. Put myself in the girls place in the story. Your stories, without fail, get me off.

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