Comments on: Fiction – The Barista

By: Rajah Dodger

Rajah Dodger — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:43:49 +0000

I think once the sweater line came out I was hooked for the rest of it. Bumpy ride and a sparkling ending – thanks!

By: marcelloNYC

marcelloNYC — Tue, 03 Feb 2009 21:59:12 +0000

After reading the first few paragraphs, I had strong urge for coffee. So I Brewed some Java and by the end of the story I was caffeinated, horny and wanting more.

Awesome!

Favorite Line – “She wore an argyle sweater of dark green and burgundy. It was a low v cut sweater that showed her whole-milk colored cleavage which was sprinkled with freckles like a dusting of cinnamon on a foamy drink.”

By: A Good Start at writingdirty

A Good Start at writingdirty — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 01:11:36 +0000

[...] The Barista “I like my women like I like my coffee…” A snarky barista and a pretension customer meet up after hours. Caffeine plus hate sex equal hot times. Slight forced play. [...]

By: The Barista-an erotic coffee experience « Brief Erotica

The Barista-an erotic coffee experience « Brief Erotica — Fri, 17 Oct 2008 19:27:45 +0000

[...] Barista-an erotic coffee experience This is a story written by Jack from Writing Dirty. This story was written in two parts. I find the first part highly erotic because it is all mental [...]

By: songbird

songbird — Sat, 20 Sep 2008 16:14:39 +0000

Fuck me, that is the hottest coffee I’ve had for a while. Absolutely loved the luscious first section, for two years I worked as a barista, and cleaning that milk nozzle never seemed so good till now.
Great fucking, great characters. Love your style.

By: Ellie

Ellie — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 18:09:00 +0000

Okay, I read the sex part. Yeah, it is hot. Here is your pat on the head

By: jdawn

jdawn — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 16:26:00 +0000

I’m glad to hear it. And sort of – more like a displaced NYer about to come back home.

By: Jack

Jack — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 15:35:00 +0000

Janie: I like making you squirm.

Mariella: It is a lovely feeling. When you can make out all the bits through the wet fabric. Lovely.

Lilly: I'm glad. Thanks for the help.

jdawn: I'm working on it. A fellow NYer?

Ellie: But I'm so proud of the sex part!

By: Ellie

Ellie — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 15:16:00 +0000

Knowing what you were going for, this is perfect. The dialogue is like nothing that anyone would ever say but it is what characters like yours would fantasize about saying. The coffee=sex=coffee similes in the beginning start off clever and hot but go over the top really fast. This is fucking brilliant. I quit reading before the sex started because there didn’t seem to be a point but you hit the nail right on the head, my friend.

By: jdawn

jdawn — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 06:34:00 +0000

Oh my.

Recently found you, only wish there were more. I love your writing.