Comments on: Fiction – Halloween http://writingdirty.com/archives/225 erotic short stories by jack stratton Fri, 05 Mar 2010 11:14:14 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Wilhelmina http://writingdirty.com/archives/225/comment-page-1#comment-294 Wilhelmina Fri, 07 Nov 2008 10:23:14 +0000 http://writingdirty.com/?p=225#comment-294 *Very* hot. A couple of typos here and there, not to be nitpicky or anything, these things just jump out at me for some reason. I blame the writing tutoring. Oddly enough I wrote about something similar a week or so ago, except it wasn't at a Halloween party. *Very* hot. A couple of typos here and there, not to be nitpicky or anything, these things just jump out at me for some reason. I blame the writing tutoring.

Oddly enough I wrote about something similar a week or so ago, except it wasn’t at a Halloween party.

]]> By: Thursday's Child http://writingdirty.com/archives/225/comment-page-1#comment-293 Thursday's Child Fri, 07 Nov 2008 04:19:39 +0000 http://writingdirty.com/?p=225#comment-293 Mmmm, nothing turns me on quite like your words...they transport me to another place, where I am the girl in the story, feeling what she feels, wanting what she wants. It's really too bad you won't be able to help me try out the Curve...maybe I'll have to take a cue from bbg and start handing out personal videos. Oh, and I meant what I said about the editing. Whenever you need something looked over, email it to me, I've always got five minutes for you. And speaking of things for you...have you read my latest "story"? I've been meaning to write it up ever since we last talked of threesomes. http://thursdayschildhasfartogo.blogspot.com/2008/11/she-never-knew-what-she-was-missing.html Mmmm, nothing turns me on quite like your words…they transport me to another place, where I am the girl in the story, feeling what she feels, wanting what she wants.

It’s really too bad you won’t be able to help me try out the Curve…maybe I’ll have to take a cue from bbg and start handing out personal videos.

Oh, and I meant what I said about the editing. Whenever you need something looked over, email it to me, I’ve always got five minutes for you. And speaking of things for you…have you read my latest “story”? I’ve been meaning to write it up ever since we last talked of threesomes. http://thursdayschildhasfartogo.blogspot.com/2008/11/she-never-knew-what-she-was-missing.html

]]> By: BrownCow http://writingdirty.com/archives/225/comment-page-1#comment-287 BrownCow Tue, 04 Nov 2008 20:42:19 +0000 http://writingdirty.com/?p=225#comment-287 How is it that you know all these lucky girls? ;-) Thanks for following me on twitter, btw. /conways How is it that you know all these lucky girls? ;-)
Thanks for following me on twitter, btw.
/conways

]]> By: mina http://writingdirty.com/archives/225/comment-page-1#comment-286 mina Tue, 04 Nov 2008 20:25:05 +0000 http://writingdirty.com/?p=225#comment-286 Wow.. fantastic Halloween story! Better late then never indeed! Wow.. fantastic Halloween story! Better late then never indeed!

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