Comments on: Mister McIntyre’s Secret – Part One

By: Curvaceous Dee

Curvaceous Dee — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 04:46:00 +0000

Oh, I’m intrigued! Can’t wait to read more

xx Dee

By: Janie Blooms

Janie Blooms — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 01:03:00 +0000

Ohhh, okay, then! This is some real good stuff. I read it aloud!

And I wonder if I should wait to comment til I read all four parts. But I’m just gonna start now: the blinking away tears part was just terrific. You are right on.

By: Lilly

Lilly — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 21:26:00 +0000

I’ll vouch for the brutal

an interesting twist there, Mr. Jack, with this one..more please…

By: Jack

Jack — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 20:27:00 +0000

ellie: all the better for female readers to record.

mariella: I’m not very. Sometimes I’m practically brutal.

By: Mariella

Mariella — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 19:48:00 +0000

Dear, sweet Christ, doll…no fair.

By: Ellie

Ellie — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 18:57:00 +0000

Ooh, another female narrator!