Comments on: Fiction – Rent

By: Table of Contents « writingdirty

Table of Contents « writingdirty — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 16:15:32 +0000

[...] Rent A broke roommate finds an interesting way to pay her half of the rent. [...]

By: comfydildo

comfydildo — Tue, 16 Dec 2008 23:24:20 +0000

I rather enjoyed this story. It’s not often I read erotica written by a man, but this was a wonderful departure from “I like big fake tits and shoving my cock in stuff.” As Wilhelmina said, gender perspectives on sex entertain me. I’m often left to wonder how much of what the media tells me men think really does pass through their minds, in any form at all. I’d love to interview you for my blog some time. E-mail me if you’re interested. comfydildo.unlaidenswallow[at]gmail[dot]com. You can also IM me at comfyanddarling on AIM.

By: mina

mina — Mon, 08 Dec 2008 03:36:52 +0000

I really enjoyed this one. I can just imagine being the roommate with no money *smiles*

By: Wilhelmina

Wilhelmina — Sun, 07 Dec 2008 23:58:59 +0000

…I enjoyed that. What I find interesting about reading your stories is that they also present such insight into… male sexuality, as it were. I know that sounds like a horrible generalization, but as most sexblogs that I read are written by women, it’s always interesting when I can contrast their (and my) fantasies with those of a straight male.

By: Rhonda Leigh Jones

Rhonda Leigh Jones — Fri, 05 Dec 2008 17:04:37 +0000

I think we are of the same tribe!

By: petruchio

petruchio — Fri, 05 Dec 2008 02:56:10 +0000

This was a good story. I really enjoy your writing, you are very descriptive but still stimulate my imagination. Your product reviews are great but keep up the fiction, its excellent.

By: t

Fri, 05 Dec 2008 02:09:39 +0000

i always look forward to your posts, i must your blog every day! lol. i really enjoyed your writing, as usual, but i found that the jump from sweet and innocent room mate to sex slave was too sudden. the room mate went from keeping to herself to offering her body and everything associated too quickly. maybe thats the nature of a short story, things have to develop at a certain pace. thats my only criticism, hope its helpful and not hurtful
looking forward to the next story xx

By: larissa

larissa — Fri, 05 Dec 2008 00:52:48 +0000

i don’t think the words “electric bill” and “cable bill” have ever sounded so erotic.. !!! Thanks, i enjoyed this!