Comments on: Fiction – The Date, Part Two

By: rev

rev — Wed, 18 Feb 2009 01:50:48 +0000

“It is always awkward for me to take it, because in a way I have been careful all my life not to, but once we were there and once we trusted each other enough, the decision is made and I find I am more than capable of enjoying it.” — yup, nailed it.

By: A Good Start at writingdirty

A Good Start at writingdirty — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 01:11:53 +0000

[...] Date – Part One, Part Two A rather involved date rape roleplay [...]

By: mina

mina — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 05:21:15 +0000

mmmm…. just perfect!

By: Birdy

Birdy — Fri, 26 Dec 2008 23:49:49 +0000

My God, I usually read what you write and am left fluttering a bit, but this had me practically panting at times. So very hot, so very good.

By: Wilhelmina

Wilhelmina — Thu, 25 Dec 2008 18:01:24 +0000

Yum.

By: Kathulhu

Kathulhu — Wed, 24 Dec 2008 19:14:47 +0000

“I moved my cock back to her cunt and it slipped in like there were magnets connecting our sexes” — I have never, ever heard it put like that. The imagry is amazing!

By: Fiction - The Date, Part One at writingdirty

Fiction - The Date, Part One at writingdirty — Wed, 24 Dec 2008 18:46:37 +0000

[...] This story involves forced sex/rape fantasies and role playing. Read Part Two [...]

By: Ursula

Ursula — Wed, 24 Dec 2008 12:56:09 +0000

Really, quite delicious. Had me holding my breath at a few points, as if the sound or movement would disrupt the reading.

By: scribecalledsteff

scribecalledsteff — Wed, 24 Dec 2008 09:46:29 +0000

durty.

By: StacyCat

StacyCat — Wed, 24 Dec 2008 05:42:09 +0000

Beautiful! I loved it!