Comments on: Betty the Bruiser

By: Table of Contents « writingdirty

Table of Contents « writingdirty — Sun, 06 Dec 2009 16:15:17 +0000

[...] Betty the Bruiser A littel moody piece about a pouting roller derby girl, some bourbon and a black eye.. [...]

By: Iris

Iris — Wed, 29 Jul 2009 02:15:06 +0000

This made me cry.

God, I need to find a boy to hurt me.

By: Twittilate

Twittilate — Thu, 28 May 2009 21:14:20 +0000

You write beautifully.

By: E

Fri, 20 Mar 2009 00:34:46 +0000

i agree– sad and intense, and real. Thought about this one a few times today. Such an old story, but made completely new again by your telling it.

By: showingmyassets

showingmyassets — Thu, 19 Mar 2009 15:14:42 +0000

Wow that was intense and left me sad at the end. Makes me think about how some relationships are not meant for the long haul. You kept my attention the whole time from start to finish here. Thanks.