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Comment on The Secret I Couldn’t Keep by Mia

Mia — Tue, 09 Feb 2010 03:31:10 +0000

Well played (and written). I like that you made a show of the condom. A delicate line that you successfully crossed.

Comment on The Secret I Couldn’t Keep by Desiree

Desiree — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 23:58:27 +0000

*Pant* Seriously, dude. *Pant*

Comment on The Secret I Couldn’t Keep by twittilate

twittilate — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 21:39:11 +0000

oh oh oh

Comment on Erotica As a Tool by Tony

Tony — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 21:36:11 +0000

I wrote this last night at CV but didn’t share because it wasn’t finished, tell me what you think…

“There’s always room for champagne” she told me. We drank. Seeing her after all this time was all I wanted.

“I missed you.”

“I missed you too.”

She has not idea whats about to happen.

“Why so quiet?”

I told her I just liked looking at her. We kissed. She kisses me so soft and is surprised when I bit her lip. I leaned back and looked at her nipples poking through her white tank top. I want them. My hands moved up her shirt to her breast. They’re so small. Squeezing them feels so good. She’s breathing heavier. My skin is hot. I can feel my cock awakening. I want her.

“Take off your shirt.”

She does. I’ve never seen her breast before and brush away her long hair and see dark nipples. I’ve never seen nipples so dark. They grow when I pinch them. My mouth waters as I taste the salt on her breast. I pull her nipples with my teeth. Her hand pulls me in by the back of my neck as I suckle. She wants me too. I want to be inside her so bad. I want to tell her that I need her. She stands and as I look up she is towering over me, and I love the curve on the bottom of her breasts. I’m grabbing the back of her thighs and lift her up. She gasps when she feels the cold wall on her back. Her legs spread and I press myself on her. I’m going to take her pussy. I love the feeling of spreading her legs. I love the thought of them wide open. She is submitting to me.

Comment on Co-Hypno-Topping by e[lust] #4 : Tales from the Porn Store

e[lust] #4 : Tales from the Porn Store — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 04:25:56 +0000

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Comment on Co-Hypno-Topping by Fluence

Fluence — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 16:17:14 +0000

Gosh. Some interesting ideas, there Jack. Hmm. Ahem. Thank you for a most… affecting… post.

Comment on Tags by Troy

Troy — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 13:44:41 +0000

Hi, Jack! Tag Party was my original idea. Didn’t get it off the Internet. Just made it up. Seemed like a tidy solution to a vexing problem specific to supposed “play parties” … especially ones where you haven’t brought your own play partner. You can see the genesis in this post ( http://troyorleans.com/2008/06/so-like-i-have-this-fantasy/ ).

Gonna have one of these soon. And I’ll be sure to invite you.

Comment on Jack in the Media! by maymay

maymay — Mon, 18 Jan 2010 17:20:55 +0000

Thanks for being on Kink On Tap with the rest of us, Jack! You were delightful as always. =)

Comment on Fiction – The Barista by Rajah Dodger

Rajah Dodger — Sat, 16 Jan 2010 20:43:49 +0000

I think once the sweater line came out I was hooked for the rest of it. Bumpy ride and a sparkling ending – thanks!

Comment on Co-Hypno-Topping by e[lust] #4 (I lust for e-lust!) « Strapped In Silk

e[lust] #4 (I lust for e-lust!) « Strapped In Silk — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 01:52:39 +0000

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